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Reviews For Visions of Sugarplums Danced in Their Heads
Author's Response: Thanks fortaking the time to review and I'm very glad you like Polly. I didn't really think about how Severus was sort of contributing as much as everyone else now, but you're right, he totally it. I think it will be very hard for Severus to forget what happened in this world when he returns. The fact that Amelia, Sirius and Grace won't exist make me a little sad too. They were so fun to create. I guess that's life though. Thanks again for reviewing, keep me updated on your thoughts!
Also who said Sev wouldn't make a good father or friend. He did a lot of things to put a smile on my face in this chapter :) Author's Response: Hey! Glad you like Polly. I was initially a little worried about her because I know some people have issues seeing Severus with anyone but Lily, but I like her too. He is for sure a good friend/godfather and I'm glad he put a smile on your face!
Thanks for taking the time to review! Keep me updated on your thoughts, I love hearing them.
Author's Response: Hey FMH! I think poor Sev is going to feel the same way. I really enjoy crafting the alt. world though. So much fun!
Author's Response: Hey Rusulka! I know, the poor guy. I do feel bad that I am torturing him so. Sorry about the Pauline/Polly confusion. Polly is short for Pauline (and Millie is short for Amelia). I should have made that more clear. Keep me updated on your thoughts!
Author's Response: Haha don't worry. Dumbledore is making sure real-life Severus is safe. The distilled potion is a lot more controlled ; ).
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for taking the time to review! Severus going with James was one of my favourite parts.
Author's Response: I always look forward to your reviews! They're so in depth. And Yes, Severus really is becoming part of the family.
Author's Response: Haha yeah, poor Sev. Love is pain.
Author's Response: Hey Anonymous! I'm glad you liked it. I worked a lot on the Tobias scene, so I'm glad it played out in a way you appreciated.
Author's Response: Aw I'm glad you had a wide-range of emotions reading this chapter. Every author likes to hear that! |
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