I like that Draco is a bit hyper, and can totally envision him being that way (in a safe environment, and in his second year). It's a cool idea that Slytherin 'adopts' those who have been abused. I like the idea of Theodore Nott being there to help Harry through this.
Title: Chapter 6
| 28 Aug 2014 12:30 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a hard chapter to write I think
Title: Chapter 6
| 26 Jul 2014 1:24 am
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Reviewer: severinas.96 (Anonymous)
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ooohh nonononon I had hoped this would go on for longer... I just read through all of it in like, an hour? and I have to say: I loved it! well, obviously the plot and the ideas are not something one likes to think about, but I think you've done an awsome job. This is one of the first stories of abused Harry that I thought were actually believable. And even though Snapes reactions were a bit OOC I think that they could be true and I really like this side of Snape. I also loved your idea with the Slytherin house and their acceptance of other people in their circle... in fact, I just loved all of your story. Please please update soon?
Title: Chapter 6
| 10 Jul 2014 7:27 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good insight into Slytherin
Title: Chapter 6
| 09 Jul 2014 2:04 pm
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Reviewer: haiz (Anonymous)
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Hi! Just wanted to pop in and say that I like your story. I don't care that the characters seem ooc. I'm really enjoying it. Hope you keep on with the story!
Title: Chapter 6
| 08 Jul 2014 2:18 am
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Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous)
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Good chapter, I can't wait to see how Harry progresses with Theo and Snape! Please don't leave us waiting too long :)
Title: Chapter 6
| 07 Jul 2014 2:37 am
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Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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This chapter was absolutely brilliant. I love the development of the Slytherins. I'm looking forward to more!
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