| Title: Chapter 4
| 27 May 2014 5:51 pm
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| Reviewer: JLP (Anonymous)
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I think it was realistic and understand you are trying to move the story forward. I liked the chapter and I'm glad Severus is coming around too.
Great update! I agree that it is realistic. :)
| Title: Chapter 4
| 27 May 2014 5:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, I love how this is going. Thanks for the update, I'll await the next one!
Hello, I read your story and I agree with you, it is realistic. The emotional wounds, though not seen, perceived reach. One does not go through life with me face nothing happened and everything is fine. The pain runs away, can be seen for who is an observer. Besides Harry is a child, not an adult. And everyone wants to be saved from a bad situation, much more a child. To me it seems credible. And I really like your Snape. I even like the story go slowly. Keep it up, going well.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 26 May 2014 12:26 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very upsetting but well written thank you
| Title: Chapter 2
| 26 May 2014 12:16 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good place to stop thank you
| Title: Chapter 1
| 26 May 2014 12:08 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good start to your story
| Title: Chapter 3
| 24 May 2014 9:57 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh! Your writing is amazing, so descriptive! Please please update soon, i love your characterizations of Snape and Harry. I'm usually pretty picky about fanfictions, but your writing has barely anything for me to complain about! Waiting for the update :)
| Title: Chapter 3
| 23 May 2014 7:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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nice way of writing :)
it's good to read.
And interesting opening to the story.
I will wait for next chapters :)
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