Title: Chapter 4: Christmas
| 23 Jun 2014 9:24 pm
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Reviewer: Yondi (Signed)
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Great story so far and great chapter as well! I like the way you portray Harry and Sev, the whole idea of the potion and its effects... everything! Can't wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It's good to hear! The next update will not be as rapid as the first few were, but I anticipate a week or two.
Yes...I knew it...but then again..most stories with Dursely Abuse have it..I love it when Sev finds out..Good job btw
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! It is somewhat predictable, but it just fits too well..
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas
| 23 Jun 2014 6:47 am
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Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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Great chapter! I was really happy to see that you posted 3 chapters at once. Very well-written and engaging.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I've ended up with quite a lot written lately.
I wondered how long it would be before Harry's abuse was noticed by Snape. With Harry's problem it was just a matter of time. I liked Snape's solution of having Harry write about the abuse. Sometimes writing things out is a good form of release and a good way for Harry to start to open up and let go.
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought that was rather creative myself. I wanted Harry to start talking about things, but it just didn't feel like his character was ready.
This story is great! I enjoy the subtle humor and your characterization of Harry and Snape. This is very creative and well written. I look forward to more :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate the compliments! I am glad you think it is coming out well!
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