| Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bit of Trust
| 19 Jul 2014 12:29 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Loved it. Poor Harry must of felt like it was an interrogation. I'm so glad Snape is there to help, and that he let Harry overhear the conversation between himself and Dumbledore. Thanks for the update! Great chapter.
Author's Response: thank you! I appreciate hearing your thoughts very much, thank you for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bit of Trust
| 17 Jul 2014 1:01 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very thoughtful and sensitive to a difficult subject thank you
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you like it!
great so far please update soon
Author's Response: I'm doing my best to keep to every-other-week updates. Thanks for the encouragement!
| Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bit of Trust
| 10 Jul 2014 12:29 am
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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I was really glad when I noticed you updated again. Last chapter was really nice and I like the writing stuff down thing
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think so!
Very very nice.
I like this a lot.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
| Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bit of Trust
| 09 Jul 2014 9:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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Thanks for another chapter :)
It's great :)
Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad you think so!
| Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bit of Trust
| 09 Jul 2014 1:20 pm
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| Reviewer: emily (Anonymous)
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Love the balance and nuance of this chapter. I think the dynamic between the two is spot on and the slow development very well written. Great job! I hope another chapter is coming soon
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you think so!!
| Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bit of Trust
| 09 Jul 2014 9:12 am
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| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
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At least Severus now knows a more about what Harry went through. Lets hope he thinks its enough to get Harry out of that house.
Author's Response: don't worry, Severus is working on it!
| Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bit of Trust
| 09 Jul 2014 6:08 am
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| Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed)
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So good!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
I'm glad you gave a timeline of the binding. I had wondered how far along Harry and Snape were in the process. Snape is doing a good job in gaining Harry's trust. Using the game is a good idea. It gives Harry something else to concentrate on while he is talking.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so!
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