I always enjoy reading this one
Yep, he wouldn't have made that binding potion, its usually what outcomes we can get. Muahahaha. Lovely story, very very lovely, I love it.
So good to read this again.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. The pacing worked well. I like how you had Harry reveal (slowly, and not all at once) how he was treated by the Dursleys. The ending works very well. Nicely done.
*applause* I loved this story, and the last scene was so appropriate! Of course, if you get an idea for a sequel, then by all means, do it. It does seem pretty well finished on its own though.
Author's Response: thank you!
Ah, bravo! I really enjoyed this piece. Poor Harry, though - my arms and shoulders ached in sympathy. I feel that you did a great job depicting this situation. It made for a satisfying read.
Author's Response: so glad you think so, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue
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Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oh very nice I loved how you had sev get harry to write to him what happened.
Author's Response: Thanks so glad you liked it!!
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