That is an interesting first chapter. It sounds like Harry and Snape are in for an embarrassing holiday. I like the way you are portraying the characters. Snape is his usual snarky self, enjoying Harry's misery until he has to take care of him. Of course Malfoy and his goons had to get their licks in whenever possible. At least Harry won't have to put up with them over Christmas. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! Yes, they are in for quite the embarrassing holiday. You can expect chapter two out over the weekend, it is almost completely written.
wow that sucks. Harry never gets a break.
Author's Response: Haha, of course not! No breaks for our young hero, not yet at least.
| Title: Chapter 1: The Potion
| 20 Jun 2014 4:54 am
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| Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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This looks interesting so far. It's well-written, and you kept Snape quite in character, if a bit more mellow than in canon. Looking forward to an update.
Author's Response: Thank you, that is encouraging to hear! That was actually (basically) the kind of Snape I was aiming for -- something close to canon, but with perhaps a bit less bite, although I was not sure he came out exactly as I hoped.
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