What a beautifully written story so far. You haven't overdone Harry's injuries, but kept things believable, and allowed his courage and determination to shine through. The OCs have demonstrated a good range of characteristics, although its a bit of a mystery how Emily managed to pass checks for suitability to look after a child. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Harry deals with Hogwarts and magic.
Author's Response: thank you I'm so glad you like it! I'm glad you think it's believable too, or at least mostly. thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 5: London
| 18 Jul 2014 1:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely writing had a lump in my throat! Thank you
Author's Response: glad you liked it!
| Title: Chapter 5: London
| 17 Jul 2014 1:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Maurys (Anonymous)
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A similar phenomenon is called a "sense of obstacles" in my first language; so, maybe "obstacle sensing"?
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion, I'll keep it in mind!
This story is great so far. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad you think so!
| Title: Chapter 5: London
| 11 Jul 2014 6:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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I'm totally hooked! This is brilliant, please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you like it! I'm working on the next chapter, I'm trying to keep to an every-other-week update schedule.
I am so loving this story! It's fresh and I hope you continue with it soon. I hope Harry is able to connect with Severus fairly quickly before any of the usual gryffs get latched onto him.
Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad you enjoy it!!
| Title: Chapter 5: London
| 11 Jul 2014 7:26 am
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| Reviewer: JB (Anonymous)
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Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Harry's had quite a life out on the streets. Hogwarts will be a real change for him. I imagine Snape will take him to get his supplies. I wonder how the wizarding world deals with the disabled?
Author's Response: Guess we'll find out!!
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