This is a powerful start to your story.
| Title: The Request
| 29 Jun 2014 9:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very original idea and story
Author's Response: I'm glad that you thought this was an original idea and story. :-) It's hard to be original nowadays, because so much has already been written.
Interesting first chapter. I wonder what Harry is up to that he has everyone so concerned. I hope this mission ends up helping both Harry and Severus find peace. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you found the first chapter interesting, and that you are looking forward to reading the next chapter. Both boys will find a semblance of peace, though not right away.
More, more, awesome plot!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I hope that you'll like the next chapter - it's a little heavier.
Awesome awesome awesome start to the challenge! I loved the first chapter. It is fitting that Snape is malcontent with paradise. Maybe he will also learn something out of this. It was really original that Dumbledore looks like a teenager now. Great first chapter. Thanks for starting it!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like the start of this. :-) I hope you'll like the rest of it. For some reason, the challenge spoke to me, and I ended up writing the whole story in one sitting. Thank you for the encouragement.
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