This was so intense and beautifully written.
| Title: The Eyes in the Mirror
| 29 Jun 2014 9:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sad chapter very well written thank you
Author's Response: Thank you; in many ways this was the hardest and yet my favorite chapter (aside from the last one) to write. It was also tricky, because I wanted to capture Harry's despair just right.
Harry is in a bad way. I'm surprised that he didn't recognize the eyes right away but Harry is probably too drunk to pull that thought together. Snape has his work cut out for him.
Author's Response: He is in a bad way, and Snape does have his work cut out for him. Thank you so very much for reading this, and sharing your thoughts about it with me.
| Title: The Eyes in the Mirror
| 27 Jun 2014 2:17 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Omg! Poor Harry. I hope that Snape can help him.
Too bad that Snape couldn't come back to life somehow and help Harry. He is so alone. He needs someone to get him back on track.
Interesting concept this story. Anxious to see where you go with it.
Author's Response: Thank you. Harry is in desperate straits right now. I'm glad that you find the concept of the story interesting, and I do hope that you like where it is heading. Hopefully you will like the next chapter.
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