Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Visitation 04 Apr 2022 8:52 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was great - unique and beautifully executed.
Title: The Visitation 24 Mar 2016 10:57 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Fabulous.

    Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad that you liked this.
Title: The Visitation 21 Oct 2014 3:09 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    So, I saw this little tale and had my interest piqued. I'm so glad it caught my eye! The way you executed this story was both compelling and most satisfying to read. It certainly gets a fave! Bravo.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad that you happened upon this story, and that you enjoyed it. Makes me very happy to hear that. :-)
Title: The Visitation 14 Oct 2014 2:32 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this was wonderful thank you I loved how you wrote this

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback, and your kind words. I'm glad that you enjoyed this story. :-) 
Title: The Visitation 30 Jun 2014 4:14 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I was hoping this was going to be a longer story, but that last chapter made it just perfect - feelgood and hopeful, but not too fluffy. I loved it.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad that, though you were hoping for a longer story, you thought the ending was good. Initially, I was trying to write a one-shot, and it got away from me. I am considering writing a sequel to this, where Severus gets to visit Harry when he's younger. Dumbledore's next meddlesome project. Thank you so very much! 

Title: The Visitation 30 Jun 2014 3:36 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute story.

    I wouldn't mind reading more of this universe.

    I wish we could read more, and wish that Snape could help Harry out when he's younger and get him on a better path.

    Anyway, great story and great possibilities to maybe expand on it, should you wish.

    Author's Response:

    I like the idea of Severus being able to go back in time - the afterlife is not bound by time constraits (at least not in my understanding of it) and now you've got me thinking of expanding on this...a plot bunny is currently hopping around in my head. Perhaps this shall become a series, and Harry and Severus might, thanks to Dumbledore's meddling, end up having a better life. I shall have to do some plotting, and writing.


    Thank you! 

Title: The Visitation 29 Jun 2014 10:08 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter and ending thank you so much

    Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad that you liked it. :-)
Title: The Visitation 29 Jun 2014 6:07 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice ending. I like that both Severus and Harry seem to have both overcome their guilt. Having Severus deaging when he felt that freedom was a nice touch. Now we know why Albus was so young in the first chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you liked the ending, and that it seemed to work well. I appreciate the feedback. :-) 

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