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Title: Chapter Six-A Problem At Hand 24 Jun 2014 6:36 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    So the staff is as amused at Harry's name for Severus as I was. I'm enjoying other characters showing up in the story and had wondered if Harry would end up in Molly's care at some point. She is the logical one for babysitter. I like the way you are alternating between Harry's point of view and Snape's. Reading their different viewpoints is fun. Just on comment - no one is two words, not one.
Title: Chapter Five-The Dinner 24 Jun 2014 6:26 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wondered when Harry would meet the staff. Poor Severus must have been embarrassed that they thought that he had a secret son. It was a good idea to introduce them both to the staff ahead of time though. It gives everyone time to get used to the idea before school starts.
Title: Chapter Four-Snuggles 24 Jun 2014 6:21 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Harry's name for Snape - Nape. It always makes me chuckle. Harry may have desperately needed hugs and love but our favorite potions' master certainly could use some of that himself, even if he wouldn't admit it.
Title: Chapter Two-Close 24 Jun 2014 10:20 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    I got really sad this chapter..I was thrown back into the last movie where Lily was telling Harry to be safe, be strong after your small quote. Cute story but I now realize I prefer toddler Harry and guardian Sev stories..baby Harrys are usually harder to read at time.

    Author's Response: The other chapters aren't so sad! I'm sure you'll find fluff in chapter four
Title: Chapter Three-Drama 24 Jun 2014 6:41 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, it seems Severus has Harry at his Spinner's End home. Dumbledore's suggestion came as a surprise. I thought Harry wouldn't want to leave Snape. Snape is the first person in some time to show him any positive attention. And Snape has become attached (though he denies it).

    Author's Response: Dumbledore was testing. There is something wrong with that man :p thanks for reading!
Title: Chapter Two-Close 24 Jun 2014 6:34 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It's happening - Snape is being overcome by cute. I knew he couldn't resist. Next thing, he'll have the crib in his bedroom to keep an eye on Harry.
Title: Chapter One-Baby Harry 24 Jun 2014 6:27 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I always enjoy baby Harry and Snape stories. I assume that Severus has Harry in his quarters in Hogwarts? If so it won't be long until the staff descends on him to see little Harry. From the sound of things, Dumbledore should assign a house elf to help with young Harry. Though that may be too strange for a little one right now.
Title: Chapter Seventeen-Classes and Family 24 Jun 2014 6:17 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    aww!!!

    que lindo finc, (lo acabo de encontrar), y que capítulo más triste pobre Harry y pobre Severus

    espero que estén tanto mejor en la mañana

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