Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Ordinary 23 Sep 2014 4:11 pm
Reviewer: Arwen_Evenstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm, I think some of these concepts are pushing that 16 up rating.

    Author's Response: According to the guidelines, it simply says that the scenes must not be acted out.  It never says that the topics can't be mentioned or talked about.  This is on par, if not milder, than the other stories on this website.
Title: Ordinary 19 Jul 2014 9:50 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A very dramatic start, thank you
Title: Ordinary 10 Jul 2014 11:53 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an interesting opening. Especially the way you began with Harry's fairy tale of an ordinary life. His reasoning in going to Snape about Black makes sense. Whatever he thinks of Snape, the man is a head of house and a teacher. With that and his hatred of Black, he will probably believe Harry and act on whatever he is told.
Title: Ordinary 10 Jul 2014 12:00 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like you introduction at the beginning it's a really nice way to start of. I also find your plot really realistic so far. At least I myself start with stupid things that are somehow related before I can really say it. It makes it real and believable. And by stopping at this point you leave questions and things the reader really wants answers too so we will keep reading.It also tends to make us (or at least me) really impatient. And now I have to wait *sigh*
Title: Ordinary 09 Jul 2014 8:55 pm
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow... what a cliffie.. ;)

    well written and interesting - I can't wait to read more, as the plot seems to be very interesting.

    I like your Snape :) Harry is a little too straightforward, but it probably be explained later.
    it definitely has a potential :)
Title: Ordinary 09 Jul 2014 6:35 pm
Reviewer: Roselina4389 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love how you wrote Snape. Nicely written. I rarely read every paragraph of stories. I usually skip some. But I enjoyed every word you wrote. I have an idea about what Sirius did (gulps) but I want you to update!
Title: Ordinary 09 Jul 2014 12:43 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!
    Sirius abused Harry?
    I am wondering about the Biological father thing.
    Can't wait to read more. This story looks very promising.

    Author's Response: See that's the one thing I didn't like about this site is it required me to give the Snape-is-Harry's-biological-father-thing away.  Shh all the people on FanFiction don't know that yet.
Title: Ordinary 09 Jul 2014 9:21 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I would hate to be ordinary like that. That would be very boring.
    OMG Sirius what do you do? Scratch that lets hope he didn't do what I think he did.

    Author's Response:

    Yup, that's kind of the whole point.  Harry wants a boring life, because we all want what we can't have.

     

    Ha, you'll just have to wait to find out about Sirius.  That's actually not going to be the focus of the story though.

Title: Ordinary 09 Jul 2014 7:00 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This is captivating and well written :)
Title: Ordinary 09 Jul 2014 6:09 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, so you have me hooked from the first passage! Lol, this looks like it will be awesome, I can not wait for an update!

    Also, "And you think that if I had your dogfather more, then I'll believe you."
    I think that is supposed to be 'hate' not 'had'?

    I'm in love with your Snape, he's not too cruel, not too concerned, just right. And OMG, please update soon! So well written, thanks for sharing!

    Author's Response: You are absolutely right, that is a typo!  Thanks for catching it!  Thank you for enjoying, I'm glad I can capture Snape's personality well.

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