I hate, hate, hate this Dumbledore!! You have done a wonderful job with his character. Strong emotions are evoked in the reader only by a competent writer and you have done so brilliantly. This chapter was like a splash of cold water on my face.
Every single fact shocked me to the core. Harry was having hallucinations? Snape's memories were false? Dumbledore is an idiot? My mouth dropped open at the beginning of the chapter and didn't close until the end. Absolutely brilliant! This is both original and fantastically written. I love your Severus and I am heartbroken that his memories were all taken away. Did I mention that I hate Dumbledore? Thanks for a fantastic read!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Prepare yourself for drenches of cold water though. I just posted the epilogue so you can get the whole story now! Oh, and please review lots. I like your reviews! :D
| Title: What You Don't Know Won't Hurt You
| 29 Sep 2014 3:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Arwen_Evenstar (Anonymous)
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Wow! Very good chapter, but when Dumbledore told Snape about Harry, I still don't think it was emotional enough. This is big news for Snape, and his reaction could have been a lot bigger. A little more decription could have done this for me.
| Title: What You Don't Know Won't Hurt You
| 06 Aug 2014 9:18 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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I would of killed dumbles the greater good my a**. Jerk.butblove the story take harrybempty vault and run leave it all behind.
| Title: What You Don't Know Won't Hurt You
| 23 Jul 2014 12:47 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Omg!!! That old fool!
How horrible! I can't believe that Severus doesn't even have the memory now to view. How can Dumbles have done something so horrible.
Well, Harry will have family now at least to lean on, and so will Snape.
I love Severitus stories.
| Title: What You Don't Know Won't Hurt You
| 19 Jul 2014 8:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
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wow I never thought Albus could stoop any lower. What an arse. Destroying people lives for his own greater good.
| Title: What You Don't Know Won't Hurt You
| 19 Jul 2014 8:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a well written chapter
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