Oh no! Harry is rejecting him. This is heartbreaking. I really wanted them to get along but I understand Harry's reaction. He is entitled to feel angry after the way Snape had treated him for four years. Besides hadn't Snape told him that he hated Harry infinitely? That is a lot to get over. In most stories of Snape as the natural father the transition from bitter Snape to caring Snape is too sudden and this makes the situation less believable but this is defibtely not the case here. I liked how Snape was seen to care for Harry's well being even before he knew Harry was his son. He never admitted it to himself but he was willing to help the enemy's son. I hope Harry will realise this in time.
Now, I do believe I shall go to sleep. I bid you adieu. (Or maybe the adiue will wait for one more chapter.)
Sorry for the misspelling. After midnight, grammar goes flying out the window.
Author's Response: I like how you picked up on some of that stuff with Snape! He "hated Harry infinitely" but was willing to help him anyway. He chose to advocate for Harry to Dumbledore, and wanted to see Sirius torn limb from limb when he thought Sirius was guilty. Harry will eventually come around, if you haven't figured, but I know I would feel pretty angry if someone told me they were my parent after antagonizing me. (I had actually planned for Harry to accept it well, and then Harry was like "Nope, not happening.")
No need to apologize for misspelling. It's perfectly understandable. :)