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Title: What Makes People Unhappy - Misunderstanding 03 Feb 2015 12:53 pm
Reviewer: Elvira Slytherin (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this is one emotional chapter. I am glad that I'm fully awake to appreciate it. Harry’s abuse was extensive but I liked how Severus handled it. Insisting to know the details and giving sympathy instead of pity. The parallels between father and son are moving and I hope that this will convince Harry to trust his father. It seems an odd coincidence that both their abuses were condoned by Dumbledore. He ruined both of their lives almost as if he had some personal vendetta against them. Did someone from the Snape family hurt him somehow?

    I think working together would be a great idea! I’d love to read your stories both fanfiction and original and I certainly would appreciate your opinions on mine. I’m working on a couple of original short stories and one fanfiction. It’s called “For the Greater God” and it also features a meddlesome and heartless Dumbledore. I’d be honored if you’d beta read my story. Although, I probably can’t update it this month. February is the month of exams in Italy. (Why? Just why don’t they use the Avada Kedavra! It’s an easier way to die not to mention an honorable way for a potterhead.)

    I’ll drop by your facebook page and send you a message with my email address. I hope I’ll get to read more of your stories!

    Author's Response:

    It's funny that you question if Dumbledore has a personal vendetta against Harry and Severus...I'm sitting here grinning.  You're good.  ;)

    Good luck on your exams!  I definitely understand if you don't have time to write for a bit.  =) 

Title: What Makes People Unhappy - Misunderstanding 18 Aug 2014 12:53 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A difficult chapter but you and Severus handled it very well?
Title: What Makes People Unhappy - Misunderstanding 12 Aug 2014 5:09 am
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh gosh, this is wonderful! I can pedic what happens next because if the warnings, but I still can't wait do find out how it happens. :D this story is great :D
Title: What Makes People Unhappy - Misunderstanding 11 Aug 2014 6:51 pm
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good job Severus.
Title: What Makes People Unhappy - Misunderstanding 11 Aug 2014 1:36 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    Very entertaining. I like the hand thing
Title: What Makes People Unhappy - Misunderstanding 11 Aug 2014 4:29 am
Reviewer: chris (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm really liking the story but it seems that you might be forcing a text size when you format it as this is the only chapter that the sites text size doesn't work on

    Author's Response: Hmm, I had trouble posting this chapter, so maybe that has something to do with it.  Apologies for the inconvenience!
Title: What Makes People Unhappy - Misunderstanding 10 Aug 2014 10:55 pm
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    interesting developments. I am very curious of further chapters.
    And I really like your way of describing interactions between Severus and Harry.
Title: What Makes People Unhappy - Misunderstanding 10 Aug 2014 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Sissi (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi!
    I just wanted to say that I really like this story and I hope you update soon!
    I can't wait to see what happens next!
    Love
    Silvia

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