Excellent father son moment. Harry's gratitude is both sweet and heartbreaking at the same time. The fact that the wounds were used to note the passing of time is an excellent addition. It shows the reader the effect that imprisonment had on Harry more effectively than a thousand words.
I can't believe that Dumbledore can be this cruel! At first I believed he was just too focused on the greater good but now I see that he's just evil. Nothing can condone sitting by and allowing a child to be abused. I am getting the feeling that Dumbledore hates them both more and more. You ended the chapter in a perfect note, with the words "Thanks You."
Author's Response: Yes, yes, Dumbles is not a good guy. Hehe. Just wait till the next bucket of cold water falls. *looks unconvincingly innocent*
| Title: Doors to Burn
| 18 Aug 2014 1:00 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely cosy chapter I could almost feel the crackle of the fire!
| Title: Doors to Burn
| 13 Aug 2014 4:35 am
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| Reviewer: chris (Anonymous)
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Another wonderful chapter. Thank you
I want to string up Dumbles
Poor Harry. I am so glad though that Snape is really stepping up to the plate and offering support emotionally, where he is not used to, or comfortable doing.
Great job.
I can't wait till the next chapter.
Wow, that one for every hour thing is just so sad
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