Albus/Ron is a threat to Harry's life! I definitely didn't see that coming! He's getting more and more evil by the chapter. Although, as Severus pointed out, since he meddled with time so much his complete lack of morals might also be a result of misusing magic.
I've been looking forward to the moment when Snape found out about Ron and you handled that very well in this chapter. Even in this emergency, his Slytherin mind kicked in and took control of the situation by using cold logic and causion. Definitely in charater.
The sight of the normally proper Severus swearing is epic. It shows just how much he is shocked by the events that are unfolding. Poor Harry and Severus, they've been through so much and now they even have an insane headmaster out to kill them!
Author's Response: Yeah, pretty much all of Ronbledore's evilness comes from the insanity of meddling with time. I'm glad you think I kept Snape in character! It's always so hard with him.
Omg this is crazy lol, ive just been reading this the last couple of hours and im super intrigued to know what's going to happen next! Its so original, I have no idea where it's headed but cant wait to find out :)
| Title: Treachery Is an Art
| 28 Dec 2014 9:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
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