| Title: Ordinary
| 19 Jul 2014 9:50 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A very dramatic start, thank you
I was a little surprised at Snape's reaction to the memory. As a former Death Eater, he has probably seen worse. Though not involving a child he has sworn to protect.
Author's Response: Yeah, he's seen a lot of crap, but I figure even most Death Eaters will respect a child enough to straight up kill them rather than assault them.
| Title: Obscured Reality Part 2
| 11 Jul 2014 9:17 am
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| Reviewer: Felicia (Anonymous)
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The first clue that harry and snape are related! I'm happen you didn't write the rape scen.
Author's Response: Well...um...it's kind of forbidden on this site if you read the rules and guidelines. I like not getting in trouble with the mods.
Albus will have to believe now. He better do something too and not just say well since Harry doesn't want to press charges there is nothing to do. There is still things that can be done to prevent it from happening again.
| Title: Obscured Reality Part 2
| 11 Jul 2014 6:23 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Eagerly awaiting more! :D
| Title: Obscured Reality Part 1
| 11 Jul 2014 6:20 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Nice chapter, thanks for writing and the quick updates!
I'm kind of surprised Harry isn't more torn up than what he seems, I know his capacity for forgiving and love is large, but he seems so...un-affected. Well written chapter, :)
I love how quickly you produce excellent stories :)
Author's Response: Well thank you. It's a favorite pass time.
| Title: Obscured Reality Part 1
| 11 Jul 2014 12:12 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I am very anxious to see where you are going with this story and the back story about Snape being Harry's father.
Great beginning.
Dumbledore didn't exactly cover himself in glory during that exchange. It wouldn't have cost him anything to refuse to let Harry go to Grimmauld Place anymore. I'm sure Snape is shocked by the way this went.
Author's Response: Well...there is much I would like to say, but I think it would give too much away. The exchange will be better explained later. Let's say this whole story will be better explained at the end, haha.
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