Wow, what a place to end the chapter! Great job with Harry's thoughts and the descriptions. Poor kid. You did a great job getting all the important thoughts down, it flowed very smoothly. I wonder how Harry will survive. Well, on to the next chapter!
gah! please update, cliffie's are super mean!
Title: Chapter 2
| 19 Jul 2014 11:11 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow! Very dramatic than you!
Hey! That was a mean place to stop. I know, you should leave us wanting more, and I do.
I love this story. Keep the updates coming! :)
I can't wait for the next update
Title: Chapter 2
| 11 Jul 2014 6:39 pm
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Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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Ah! Such a cliffhanger! This story is off to a great start. I can't wait to see how it continues.
The worst thing about this cliffie is that I can't even complain, because I just did the exact same thing in my story. So... yeah. Just update. Please.
What a Cliffie! Literally. Great chapter but I hope you update soon!n
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