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Title: First Pieces of the Puzzle 28 Oct 2014 8:06 am
Reviewer: Post U Later (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I Love Luna So Much! & I Really Like That She Kinda Bartered For Harry's Life Using The Cat Statue. But, Where's Lupin? Is He Not On The Train?

    & OMG! Poor Baby Harry! Getting The Crucio Put On Him Like That! Who Could Have Done It? Was It Dumbledore? The Bastard! I Wouldn't Put It Past Him.
Title: First Pieces of the Puzzle 16 Oct 2014 1:43 am
Reviewer: renee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This should be canon
    Damn creepy and awsome and lunas a bamfb
Title: First Pieces of the Puzzle 07 Aug 2014 12:43 am
Reviewer: The Lonely God With A Box (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really intrigued by Luna's theory on Dementors.
Title: First Pieces of the Puzzle 22 Jul 2014 9:40 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woaaaaaahh! Great start! Very interesting and unique take to the start of third year. I wonder what the cat thing was about and why the dementors wanted it.

    It's so cool that you created this mystery about what happened to Harry in between Voldemort's death and when he was placed with the Dursley's.

    Luna seems super strange - which is what everyone thought about her in the books at first. I think you did a better job than JK Rowling in making her seem so wacky. I'm glad that she was there, I wonder if her explanation is true or not. With Remus gone from the compartment it was lucky that she helped.

    Those Dementors are so creepy.

    I'm really intrigued about the added things Harry hears when the Dementors are near. Wow.

    Great start!
Title: First Pieces of the Puzzle 19 Jul 2014 11:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting take on third year!

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