I’m re-reading this story and find it just as gripping as the first time around.
Hary, Harry, Harry. (Shakes head, sadly) You just can't stay out of trouble. Now you know things you really didn't want to about your dad and Snape wants to kill you.
| Title: One: The Crime
| 21 Oct 2014 6:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Cliffhanger much! *teasing* :D Awesome start!
Great start! Good job with Harry's inner dialogue.
| Title: One: The Crime
| 16 Jul 2014 6:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Anthezar, what happened to "One of Those Days"? This story is pretty good so far (loved the ending haha), but to be honest, I like your other one a lot more :) hopefully you'll update both soon??
oooohhh. great start!
i had initially glanced over this story cause of the tag 'corporal punishment' but then i realised it was written by you and i checked the details of the challenge. suffice to say, yea, i am glad that i clicked and read and i can't wait for the next update! thanks for sharing!
Yes, the site is back!! And yes, you wrote this!! I love you! Great start, please continue. I'm loving it.
| Title: One: The Crime
| 15 Jul 2014 6:52 am
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| Reviewer: kazetoame (Anonymous)
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I like the start to this fic. Through Harry, you bring up a point I've never thought of before with the comparison between James Potter and a young Tom Riddle. I look forward to see how this story plays out.
OOh great beginning. Looking forward to more. Can't wait.
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