I like this version better than the original
At least Snape finally got through to Harry. Maybe he will take his occlumency lessons more seriously now.
| Title: Three: The Chastisement
| 21 Oct 2014 6:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I don't like corporal punishment but I think it might help here!
| Title: Three: The Chastisement
| 07 Aug 2014 8:02 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Nice to see Harry showing some respect, :D
| Title: Three: The Chastisement
| 20 Jul 2014 1:23 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Oh wow, poor Harry. Of course he is more upset and hurt than Snape would think possible. I hope that Snape gives him a chance and believes it! Good job with both characters and Harry's train of thoughts and emotions. It was really in character and well done.
| Title: Three: The Chastisement
| 17 Jul 2014 8:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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Completely heartbreaking! Wonderfully written as well. Normally, corporal punishment scenes make me uncomfortable, but this was done so amazingly well that it didn't bother me at all. I can't wait till the next chapter!
Welp, Harry just ripped my heart out and stomped on it, oh my god, my feelings. Please update soon.
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