I love your Snape with his perfect sarcasm, bewilderment, yet steady (and somehow still largely in character) compassion.
At least Harry is starting to calm down. Snape sounds shocked but as Head of House he has probably dealt with hysterical students on occasion.
Thanks so much for sharing, you write very well!
| Title: Four: The Complaints
| 20 Jul 2014 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awww, so sweet. I'm so glad that Snape believed him, and can actually try to comfort and console him. So sweet. I preferred this lighter sort of corporal punishment. It seemed better.
Ah I can't wait for the rest!!!
This chapter was amazing.
| Title: Four: The Complaints
| 17 Jul 2014 10:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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This story is brilliant!!! I can't wait for more :)
| Title: Four: The Complaints
| 17 Jul 2014 10:03 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Ah, I really love this. And I totally agree with you about some people going overboard with spankings at every possible opportunity and really graphic and stuff. Yours was just perfect. A sound reason and a normal punishment
| Title: Four: The Complaints
| 17 Jul 2014 9:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Ah, Severus, you can never understand, can you, what it is like to be an orphan? To have every shred of your bedrock torn from you...indeed, to even have a bedrock in someone other than yourself. I wonder..how many people would truly, truly understand Harry's anguish? Kudos, and keep them coming :3
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