This was a nice, action packed chapter. I wish the quartet would just get the adults though....sigh.
| Title: Chapter 25
| 27 Jul 2014 8:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
The relationship between Harry and Snape has really blossomed. The scene where Harry tells Severus about his bad dream and Snape realizes how he feels about Harry, was lovely. I particularly like the way you are handling the characters. Even if they only appear briefly, like Filch, they are interesting and well developed. Harry is especially good. He's compassionate, grateful for any thing good and friendly without being too good to be true. I need to make sure that I marked it as a favorite because I will want to reread it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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