Fantastic update! I'm glad you're still here! Poor Harry. It seems as if he is making things worse for himself, and what is it that he heard? Hopefully nothing dangerous. I have a feeling that Harry is going to get into more trouble before he gets out of it. Thanks so much for the update and new chapter! I love your Snape! He is wonderfully in character.
So looking forward to this! A Hooray for Nightmare!Harry...or not...nightmares are shit. You really are a great writer and I enjoy your way with words. Did you change the font? I'm not sure, just felt like it (liked the one from the beginning more...I don't even know if you can change it...pretty new here...My first comment btw!...idk). ANYWAY. I really like the antsy parts. However, in my opinion it is getting a little repetitive, you know? Harry blowing up, Snape getting irritated, arguing, Harry gets punished, feeling sorry Harry goes to Snape and he forgives him...well at least until now. You did great with Snape not being as acceptive of the apology and keeping him grounded in his room. Hope you gonna keep it up! And it's so freaking cute when Harry's crying and Snapes like 'Stop crying! how the fuck am I supposed to handle a sobbing Potter-mess!' (In general a Harry in disstress and Snape not knowing how to handle it is just brilliant).
So, Thank you for being awesome!
Have a nice day
| Title: Apologies and Nightmares
| 07 Nov 2014 12:18 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very interesting chapter
| Title: Of Punishment and Betrayal
| 07 Nov 2014 12:08 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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i hope that what ever stupid mistake harry makes its worth it because snape was nice and compassionate when he had the nightmare.
| Title: Of Punishment and Betrayal
| 31 Oct 2014 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: hinaths (Signed)
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oh yay!! An update!! I don't understand how it work to have updates sent to my mail box, so I have to check myself, and I'd really like to get the updates when they come :) No flames from me! I liked it!!
| Title: Of Punishment and Betrayal
| 13 Oct 2014 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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| Title: Of Punishment and Betrayal
| 11 Oct 2014 2:51 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Signed)
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Honestly, I thought Harry was a bit OOC in this chapter, just in how he reacted to the spanking, but maybe I am just being crazy. Wonderful chapter all the same! Eagerly awaiting more!
*shakes head* your lucky harry. i would have gotten that plus a mouth washing.
| Title: Of Punishment and Betrayal
| 06 Oct 2014 6:26 am
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| Reviewer: r_1412 (Signed)
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Oh what will Snape do to Harry next time? I love to read angst, too bad this chapter is so short. I hope you write more and longer details next chapter. Thanks for updating. Can't wait to read more
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