| Title: Of Punishment and Betrayal
| 05 Oct 2014 11:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Nicole (Anonymous)
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Thanks a lot! It is one of the best fics I have ever read. Please update soon! I can't wait.
Hi thanks for the update. Can't wait to see more. I like the way your Snape was. Bitter and Snarky at first, but then I can see that he started to be fair and kind. I like it when he didn't lose his sterness, not like other authors do when they made Snape suddenly become so fluffy and made Harry seems weak. I think Harry will need strong guidance and discipline because he was just a child and Snape is the best man to do that. Keep writing and don't like other bad ratings affects you. :D
I adore this story. Your Harry and Snape are totally in character. Thank you for not going the fluffy-sensitive-Snape route. Can't wait for the next chapter! I love me some angst ;)
| Title: Slight Tenderness
| 27 Sep 2014 11:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I like to think that this may have been how Severus would react to Harry given the chance! Next chapter sounds good can't wait to read it!
| Title: Slight Tenderness
| 27 Sep 2014 3:09 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Signed)
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:D Wonderfully chapter!
And I can't wait for the angst :D!!!
i wonder when harry's going to start testing snape and his rules. great chapter. :)
| Title: Slight Tenderness
| 26 Sep 2014 8:31 pm
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| Reviewer: BertieBotss (Anonymous)
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I like your story. Update soon.
Oh, I beg to different. People can rate a chapter low for any reason they want. They shouldn't, but they will.
PS Read my other review. It tells you what I think.
Author's Response: I was checking the rating of my chapters and saw that some of them were low and the only reason was because Snape was too "mean". I got a little frustrated as I'm trying to put him in CHARACTER. I don't mind so much now but I'm still new, and I don't want people to not read my story because it's got a low rating
Hey!
I just wanted to say that I'm enjoying your story very much. I think you are doing great with Snape's personality and Harry's too. I read through your reviews because you seem so upset at people disliking Snape, but they didn't seem negative to me. I know that as the author, you are always very sensitive. (At least I am.) Keep up the good work and ignore the person who told you to use the word "preform" for do. First of all it's "perform" not "preform". Secondly, I think Snape is precise, but not deliberately wordy or flowery. Some people try to hard to use "big" words and make him sound ridiculous.
I look forward to more,
Twonky
Author's Response: Thank you.
| Title: Settling In with Snape and Hating It
| 26 Sep 2014 4:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Arwen_Evenstar (Anonymous)
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Very good. Just a few little bitty tips. :D I just want to let you know I'm an extremely pick reader. Two out of three fics I leave before the third chapter. So here's what I think. You certainly have Snape's snarkyness down pat, however, Snape is an intelligent man. In the books he uses a lot of big words. When you are writing, try looking some common words (like do) and replace them with less used words like preform. Listen to the difference in these sentences. "I have a lot of work to do." Now with some of the common words switched out. I have a massive amount of duties to preform. Not the best example but you get the idea. :D
Author's Response: I hope you liked the chapter. I am trying my best to use big words but sometimes it doesn't fit Snape's character. Though, you are absolutely right and I'll try harder.
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