*sighs and shakes head* better fess up harry. less punishment that way.
Title: The Photo
| 05 Sep 2014 8:10 pm
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Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous)
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that's good. i cant wait for the next chapter. :)
Title: Tears and Fever
| 01 Sep 2014 1:02 pm
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Reviewer: anna (Anonymous)
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Awesome story!! Love it! You write really well, brought me to tears. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
no i wasn't swearing at you. i was swearing snape. i'm sorry if i upset you. child abuse just really grates on my nerves. it caused one of my best friends to try and kill himself.
Author's Response: Oh God, I'm sorry-but Snape's not really abusing. I'm trying to make him get better and better.
i'll say you do jackass. treat harry better you stupid mother fucker.
Author's Response: Do what? Are you swearing at me, or Severus? Either way, I don't like it.
Great story and cant wait for more to come.... thanks for sharing
kalico
Title: Tears and Fever
| 31 Jul 2014 10:07 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I thought this was very good because Severus was almost IC thank you
Author's Response: What is IC? You mean OC? Oh no, I'm trying to keep him as cannon as possible. I've always thought that if Severus and Harry got to know each other they'd be closer.
Title: Tears and Fever
| 31 Jul 2014 6:54 am
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Reviewer: arwen_kk (Anonymous)
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Hi, I love to read your story. I like the way Snape and Harry interacting. Harry is a bit untrusting and not used to have adults in his life. It suits him as he was abused by his relatives. Snape was a bitter and nasty man, but nice inside. Together they will heal each other. I hope that Snape will not change to be nice so suddenly. I kind of like this bitter Snape with his scathing remarks and his stern and harsh way dealing with Harry. Like your writing style too. Please update as soon as you can, we like to read mote, thanks.
Title: Tears and Fever
| 30 Jul 2014 9:25 pm
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Reviewer: AJ (Anonymous)
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Oh i like it, i do hope snaps atarts to pay a bit more attention to harry :)
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