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Reviews For Love is a Charm
Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves 27 Feb 2022 12:53 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s nice reading this again!
Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves 12 Dec 2021 11:25 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    Going in for a reread for the 3rd time. I never get sick of this story or Severitus stories. They are like Irondad stories; a reason for living.
Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves 06 Sep 2014 6:37 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    You've probably heard this already! Your English is very good, but the punctuation makes it rough to read.

    Commas aren't used after quotation marks. "You think it'll work?", Ron murmured when they where far away from the librarian.

    Should read:

    "You think it'll work?" Ron murmured when they were far away from the librarian.

    No comma should be after the question mark and quotation mark. It works the same way if the sentence were to end in an exclamation point.

    If the sentence in quotes were going to end in a period, you'd do it this way:

    "I don't know why we're doing this," Harry said.

    That's the way you do quotations. :)

    -K

    Author's Response:

    Ah! Thanks a lot! I didn't know that and no one told me :( In german you do it like that and as I'm used to doing it that way I just kept it like that. But I'll change it now :)

    Did you read the Sequel to the story? "Love is a haven" has reached chapter 6 (just put it up) and I would appreciate it you read that too. Thanks again!

Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves 31 Jul 2014 10:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Trying to get help for Harry I think! Good start

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I have just posted the Sequel, which is only waiting for approval. I hope you read it too, enjoy it and comment as well
Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves 31 Jul 2014 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Janendra (Signed) [Report This]
    Hello, I do not speak English; That will explain everything. Oh by the gods! that was a great introduction. I like that Ron who cares about Harry. And Hermione really willing to do something. A very original idea for a fic.

    Author's Response: Thanks you so much. English is not my mother tongue as well. You can only get better if you practice, so please write a lot of reviews ;)
Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves 24 Jul 2014 7:30 am
Reviewer: Veevours (Signed) [Report This]
    this seems like a really cute story and I can't wait to read more I am really excited to see how things go during second year

    Author's Response: thanks for the nice comment! I hope you keep reading
Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves 24 Jul 2014 5:28 am
Reviewer: Veevours (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like how its Ron and Hermione
    who are to blame for the later mess

    Author's Response: lol! Yeah, I thought it would fit that two twelve year old Gryffindors would do such a thing. Good intentions and all ;)
Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves 22 Jul 2014 10:54 pm
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    So far, your English is more than readable. I wouldn't have guessed that it wasn't your first language.

    Author's Response: aaww thanks
Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves 20 Jul 2014 12:44 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting start! What are Ron and Hermione up to?

    Author's Response: thanks, you'll find out about Ron and Hermiones trick at the end
Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves 20 Jul 2014 1:51 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm looking forward to finding out what Ron and Hermione are up to since I can't imagine. Nice first chapter - it really left me wondering what would happen next.

    Author's Response: thanks, you'll find out about Ron and Hermiones trick at the end

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