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Reviews For Love is a Charm
Commas aren't used after quotation marks. "You think it'll work?", Ron murmured when they where far away from the librarian. Should read: "You think it'll work?" Ron murmured when they were far away from the librarian. No comma should be after the question mark and quotation mark. It works the same way if the sentence were to end in an exclamation point. If the sentence in quotes were going to end in a period, you'd do it this way: "I don't know why we're doing this," Harry said. That's the way you do quotations. :) -K Author's Response: Ah! Thanks a lot! I didn't know that and no one told me :( In german you do it like that and as I'm used to doing it that way I just kept it like that. But I'll change it now :) Did you read the Sequel to the story? "Love is a haven" has reached chapter 6 (just put it up) and I would appreciate it you read that too. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I have just posted the Sequel, which is only waiting for approval. I hope you read it too, enjoy it and comment as well
Author's Response: Thanks you so much. English is not my mother tongue as well. You can only get better if you practice, so please write a lot of reviews ;)
Author's Response: thanks for the nice comment! I hope you keep reading
who are to blame for the later mess Author's Response: lol! Yeah, I thought it would fit that two twelve year old Gryffindors would do such a thing. Good intentions and all ;)
Author's Response: aaww thanks
Author's Response: thanks, you'll find out about Ron and Hermiones trick at the end
Author's Response: thanks, you'll find out about Ron and Hermiones trick at the end |
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