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Title: Chapter 6 – As green as a fresh pickled toad 08 Aug 2014 2:19 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the chapter title - As Green as a Fresh Pickled Toad. So Tobias knew all along that Harry wasn't Severus' child. He put on a great show. I think he realized how much Harry and Severus need each other. Getting them together probably eased his guilt over his treatment of his son, too. I'm glad he finally told Harry about the Dark Mark. That should be a load off his mind. It must have been the elephant in the room to him.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for posting reviews for all the chapters instead of reviewing once at the end, even though the stories finished already. I really like to hear your opinions on all the chapters!

    That was exactly what I wanted to show with Tobias, he kind of remembers that he and Severus had a rotten relationship in the past and he tries everything and anything to mend it.

    Yeah, the Dark Mark was something that needed to be discussed before any permanent living arrangements could be made - it would be like he's cheating Harry into it otherwise. I myself felt like a rushed that part a bit and Harry was too forgiving, what do you think? I might address it in the sequel...

Title: Chapter 6 – As green as a fresh pickled toad 07 Aug 2014 4:55 pm
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's almost over ;-;
    Great story!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Saturday will hopefully be the day for the last chapter. I really hope you'll stick around for the sequel :)

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