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Reviews For Love is a Charm
Author's Response: :D I did not do that because I wanted to build up some suspense, it will be cleared up in the course of the story, I promise
Commas aren't used after quotation marks. "You think it'll work?", Ron murmured when they where far away from the librarian. Should read: "You think it'll work?" Ron murmured when they were far away from the librarian. No comma should be after the question mark and quotation mark. It works the same way if the sentence were to end in an exclamation point. If the sentence in quotes were going to end in a period, you'd do it this way: "I don't know why we're doing this," Harry said. That's the way you do quotations. :) -K Author's Response: Ah! Thanks a lot! I didn't know that and no one told me :( In german you do it like that and as I'm used to doing it that way I just kept it like that. But I'll change it now :) Did you read the Sequel to the story? "Love is a haven" has reached chapter 6 (just put it up) and I would appreciate it you read that too. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I have just posted the Sequel, which is only waiting for approval. I hope you read it too, enjoy it and comment as well
Author's Response: Oh that is such a lovely review, thanks so much! I've just posted the sequel and hope it will be approved shortly and that you will enjoy it too.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the nice review. I just posted the new story, its only awaiting approval from the admins
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I have just posted the Sequel, which is only waiting for approval. I hope you read it too, enjoy it and comment as well
Author's Response: Yeah, I feel the angst level in most fics is way overdone, especially the ones with the younger Harry in them. Some times they try to justify it by going crazy with the plot and having him tortured/raped etc. just for the sake of angst - I don't like that. These topics are very sensitive and should be addressed as such. I think being an orphan growing in an unloved environment is bad enough without those things as well. Dumbles always either turns into an evil git (trading postions with snape) or is completely blind - its rare to find a realistic Dumbledore who is many layered and not only manipulative. Especially if we have the canon with Ariana! Thanks a lot for your review and the kind words, I hope I can keep entertaining you with my stories. I'll message you when I post the Sequel
Author's Response: I want to work on the trusting adults thing more with harry in the sequel. You see, he doesn't trust any other adults, only sev, because he proved himself. I will try to tone down the fluff in the next story and make sev more snape-like ;)
Author's Response: thanks!
Author's Response: Yes, you did read that: There will be a sequel, so don't be too sad! :) |
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