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Reviews For Love is a Charm
Title: Chapter 1 – Some Charms don't sparkle 18 Sep 2014 6:51 am
Reviewer: Arwen Evenstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting, but I am very confused so far. You might want to give us a little more context early on as to why Snape is suddenly so nice.

    Author's Response: :D I did not do that because I wanted to build up some suspense, it will be cleared up in the course of the story, I promise
Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves 06 Sep 2014 6:37 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    You've probably heard this already! Your English is very good, but the punctuation makes it rough to read.

    Commas aren't used after quotation marks. "You think it'll work?", Ron murmured when they where far away from the librarian.

    Should read:

    "You think it'll work?" Ron murmured when they were far away from the librarian.

    No comma should be after the question mark and quotation mark. It works the same way if the sentence were to end in an exclamation point.

    If the sentence in quotes were going to end in a period, you'd do it this way:

    "I don't know why we're doing this," Harry said.

    That's the way you do quotations. :)

    -K

    Author's Response:

    Ah! Thanks a lot! I didn't know that and no one told me :( In german you do it like that and as I'm used to doing it that way I just kept it like that. But I'll change it now :)

    Did you read the Sequel to the story? "Love is a haven" has reached chapter 6 (just put it up) and I would appreciate it you read that too. Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 7 – What remains in The End 17 Aug 2014 1:19 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely ending not too fluffy thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I have just posted the Sequel, which is only waiting for approval. I hope you read it too, enjoy it and comment as well
Title: Chapter 5 – Dueling horrors 11 Aug 2014 11:54 pm
Reviewer: kazetoame (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello. I must say that this a very moving story and I adore it. I was in tears with the interaction between Severus, Tobias and Harry. It's different than most stories of this nature, I like it. Just two little nitpicks, just spelling errors is all. When Severus is speaking in a staccato, you had two kk instead of cc. Also when Severus talks to Harry after the bone incident, you want prize not price. Quick fixes. Looking forward to the rest, which I shall now read.

    Author's Response: Oh that is such a lovely review, thanks so much! I've just posted the sequel and hope it will be approved shortly and that you will enjoy it too.
Title: Chapter 7 – What remains in The End 11 Aug 2014 4:16 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this story, so its great to hear that there will be a sequel. As I read this chapter my first thought was that Hermione should keep quiet about the spell, but it was so right that she shouldn't. Its going to be great to see how Snape and Harry get on under normal circumstances.

    Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the nice review. I just posted the new story, its only awaiting approval from the admins
Title: Chapter 7 – What remains in The End 11 Aug 2014 1:43 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story! Thanks. Looking forward to a sequel.

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I have just posted the Sequel, which is only waiting for approval. I hope you read it too, enjoy it and comment as well
Title: Chapter 7 – What remains in The End 09 Aug 2014 8:36 pm
Reviewer: RonnieLepkowitz (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhhh! That was wonderful! It's usually hard to find a fic with the right amount if angst and fluff but you did wonderfully!! I also love that you included Hermione and Ron as well as Dumbles in a softer and friendly light. Your writing is simply lovely! Thank you so much it was a great read!^^ I look forward to the sequel luv.:) I'll need a good read when I'm back in college haha.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I feel the angst level in most fics is way overdone, especially the ones with the younger Harry in them. Some times they try to justify it by going crazy with the plot and having him tortured/raped etc. just for the sake of angst - I don't like that. These topics are very sensitive and should be addressed as such. I think being an orphan growing in an unloved environment is bad enough without those things as well.

    Dumbles always either turns into an evil git (trading postions with snape) or is completely blind - its rare to find a realistic Dumbledore who is many layered and not only manipulative. Especially if we have the canon with Ariana!

    Thanks a lot for your review and the kind words, I hope I can keep entertaining you with my stories. I'll message you when I post the Sequel

Title: Chapter 7 – What remains in The End 09 Aug 2014 7:30 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the story. I especially like the way Harry is starting to trust adults. The basilisk chapter sounded like something a sensible Harry would do rather than confronting the monster by himself. Severus was a bit obsessive about watching Harry so the less crazy feelings sound like they will create a more stable environment for both of them.

    Author's Response: I want to work on the trusting adults thing more with harry in the sequel. You see, he doesn't trust any other adults, only sev, because he proved himself. I will try to tone down the fluff in the next story and make sev more snape-like ;)
Title: Chapter 7 – What remains in The End 09 Aug 2014 5:47 pm
Reviewer: JB (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved your story

    Author's Response: thanks!
Title: Chapter 7 – What remains in The End 09 Aug 2014 4:10 pm
Reviewer: Janendra (Signed) [Report This]
    It's too early, I have to go to work so I'll just say this: Noooooooo, -; my favorite fic is over. Noooooo. Did I read the word sequel? I promise a better comment later.

    Author's Response: Yes, you did read that: There will be a sequel, so don't be too sad! :)

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