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Title: Chapter 7 – What remains in The End 09 Aug 2014 3:10 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    If you post it on 23rd I will consider it a amazing birthday present. And otherwise I'm still looking out for it

    Author's Response: Really? I'd like to do that, lets see if I can make it...
Title: Chapter 6 – As green as a fresh pickled toad 08 Aug 2014 2:19 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the chapter title - As Green as a Fresh Pickled Toad. So Tobias knew all along that Harry wasn't Severus' child. He put on a great show. I think he realized how much Harry and Severus need each other. Getting them together probably eased his guilt over his treatment of his son, too. I'm glad he finally told Harry about the Dark Mark. That should be a load off his mind. It must have been the elephant in the room to him.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for posting reviews for all the chapters instead of reviewing once at the end, even though the stories finished already. I really like to hear your opinions on all the chapters!

    That was exactly what I wanted to show with Tobias, he kind of remembers that he and Severus had a rotten relationship in the past and he tries everything and anything to mend it.

    Yeah, the Dark Mark was something that needed to be discussed before any permanent living arrangements could be made - it would be like he's cheating Harry into it otherwise. I myself felt like a rushed that part a bit and Harry was too forgiving, what do you think? I might address it in the sequel...

Title: Chapter 6 – As green as a fresh pickled toad 07 Aug 2014 4:55 pm
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's almost over ;-;
    Great story!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Saturday will hopefully be the day for the last chapter. I really hope you'll stick around for the sequel :)
Title: Chapter 5 – Dueling horrors 06 Aug 2014 6:06 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked your version of Tobias. I was glad that Severus explained the living situation. I had been wondering who took care of Tobias while Snape was a Hogwarts.

    Author's Response: Yeah, it just hit me that I don't have to kill off Tobias and I always missed my Grandparents growing up, so I wanted to give Harry the experience. I also think he works well as a reminder for Severus of what could go wrong...
Title: Chapter 4 - A Bludger to the Heart 06 Aug 2014 5:46 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I was glad that Albus and Severus had their talk about Harry. I'm sure that Albus is glad that Snape is feeling paternal towards Harry. The two of them seem to be getting along well so I wonder when Harry will confess his abuse at the Dursleys?

    Author's Response: The next chapter will be packed full of all the answers to your questions. As I said "truths will be revealed" so look forward to that ;) I tried hard to stay canon with everybody, I think I slipped up most on Sev and Minerva but I hope you'll agree I stayed true to Dumbledore :) Looking forward to your opinion on the last chapter
Title: Chapter 3 - Halloween 06 Aug 2014 3:19 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape would know about dealing with abused children as a Head of House. Having been one himself would also give him extra insight in dealing with them. Hopefully, Harry took it all in.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I would love to hear your opinion on the newer chapters as well :)
Title: Chapter 5 – Dueling horrors 04 Aug 2014 3:19 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was really touching. I love your portrayal of Tobias, it feels very real. My grandmother had Alzheimer and there were times she would not recognize her own children even though she recognized us, her grandchildren.

    Anyway, I'm glad Snape is no longer angry with Harry. 'You made a mistake, these are the consequences, afterwards your punishment is over and you'll be forgiven' is a good way to discipline a child.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the lovely review, I wondered if I had portrayed him well with that disease. I haven't know anyone with Alzheimer and i didn't want to be unfeeling. I will touch upon Tobias and his illness more in the sequel to "love is a charm"

     

Title: Chapter 5 – Dueling horrors 04 Aug 2014 12:53 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter

    Author's Response: thanks for the review
Title: Chapter 5 – Dueling horrors 03 Aug 2014 5:19 am
Reviewer: snarry fan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Update....pls.,....pls....update today i beg u

    Author's Response: Haha! Sorry but I already made it two updates per week. You'll have to wait!
Title: Chapter 5 – Dueling horrors 03 Aug 2014 4:23 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait

    Author's Response: Wednesday the next will appear, I hope you'll like it

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