| Title: Chapter 5 – Dueling horrors
| 03 Aug 2014 1:55 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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Wonderful chapter! I am looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks, you can look forward to the next on Wednesday!
Author's Response: Thanks, you can look forward to the next on Wednesday!
| Title: Chapter 4 - A Bludger to the Heart
| 02 Aug 2014 10:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter
Author's Response: thanks
| Title: Chapter 4 - A Bludger to the Heart
| 01 Aug 2014 2:47 am
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| Reviewer: Janendra (Signed)
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Oh gods, Severus in all its fury! Great and scary! There's something I like about the reaction of Severus and Harry when they know they will use potion Poppy. Again are these details that give realism to the story. And I really enjoy them. another great chapter touching and tender * - * thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I have just posted the Sequel and would love for your to read and review there as well. Its awaiting approval
| Title: Chapter 3 - Halloween
| 01 Aug 2014 12:44 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 2 – Mini Me in Training
| 01 Aug 2014 12:19 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I have just posted the Sequel, which is only waiting for approval. I hope you read it too, enjoy it and comment as well
| Title: Chapter 1 – Some Charms don't sparkle
| 31 Jul 2014 10:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I love Severus' bewilderment. Please can you look at the possessive apostrophe as this slightly spoils your writing for me.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I have just posted the Sequel, which is only waiting for approval. I hope you read it too, enjoy it and comment as well
| Title: Prologue - behind rows and rows of shelves
| 31 Jul 2014 10:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Trying to get help for Harry I think! Good start
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I have just posted the Sequel, which is only waiting for approval. I hope you read it too, enjoy it and comment as well
*-* Ah see Severus as concerned about common things like dinner and a nap, sweet. Oh what a way to start the frame, quick and to the point. A child should not worry about protecting adults; that is very sad. Oh Severus's reaction *^* wonderful. Every time I like the man. This was a great chapter, so many things happened. Bittersweet would be the word that best describes. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, I really like how you pick up on the little things, it makes me happy that they don't slip your notice :) Makes feel like it was worth the effort
| Title: Chapter 2 – Mini Me in Training
| 31 Jul 2014 8:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Janendra (Signed)
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Love, love, love, love this fic.It's so cute! So sweet. The interaction between friends Harry is so delicious, again genuine. The interaction of Harry with Snape I love, feels natural and as it should be. Severus is a great guy in your story. Oh it is very curious how Harry perceives magic on the arm of Severus. I wonder if it's something only he perceives. And the path mapping for Severus account of abuse, very subtle and pretty. When charging. I love your fic. Did I say before?
Author's Response: Aww, you are so cute, I love your review, thanks a bunch! I wil explore Severus past more in the sequel, i hope you will enjoy the next story as well
| Title: Chapter 1 – Some Charms don't sparkle
| 31 Jul 2014 7:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Janendra (Signed)
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I loved it from the title, is perfect. I like this Snape is so cute with Harry. Even when you do not know because it's friendly, it's so genuine. Your Snape is one of my favorites. And yes that was a surprise. I hope Harry skills are not part of the spell.
Author's Response: no harrys skills are his own entirely, and I really appreciate how you write a comment per chapter even though you could just skip ahead - hugs and kisses for that!
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