| Title: Faithful Hedwig
| 21 Mar 2005 1:31 am
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| Reviewer: Torina Archelda (Anonymous)
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I love this fic, please update soon!
~Torina
| Title: Faithful Hedwig
| 21 Mar 2005 1:31 am
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| Reviewer: Torina Archelda (Anonymous)
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I love this fic, please update soon!
~Torina
| Title: Faithful Hedwig
| 28 Feb 2005 10:54 pm
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| Reviewer: bahjcb (Anonymous)
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I like your story. I also like how you use Hedwig. I could see her getting that upset about her Harry. I can't wait to read what happens next.
| Title: Lost
| 16 Feb 2005 8:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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| Title: The Doctor.
| 16 Feb 2005 1:18 am
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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Interesting start. Curiouis as to what will happen next
OOOH!!! I can't wait to read more of this! Am really looking forward to when they find out what happened to Harry!
Author's Response: Thank you. Hope you will continue reading it.
Wow, I really like the premise for this story. It's so unusual to see a POV Muggle doctor and that makes it that much more interesting and refreshing. I'd like you to practice on this chapter making it seem more like the thoughts of a real doctor in the ER and the procedures and such. I know that you can do it and it would make the story that much better, pulling the readers into the action and really fleshing out the experience- making them fear for Harry's injuries while not really knowing what is going on. (I know that TV shows like ER does that all the time with the medical aspects.) I really like what you have done so far and I'm excited to see where you will take this. :) I hope that you will continue writing it!
Oh! I think that I've read this on FFN. Interesting start to the story. Poor Harry- it's so frightening to read from his POV and to see him refer to himself as "it". Very interesting prospective.
Author's Response: Ys, I have this on Ffas well, but I'm stuck with it at the moment, so I thought I could post it here as well. By the time I get to the chapter I'm having trouble with I should have written some more. Thanks for reviewing!
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