Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 30 Jan 2016 12:31 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Very creepy opening chapter. Having a Harry that is so addicted to the rush of Dark Magic is unnerving. You mentioned that your writing had been juvenile. If it was before, it isn't now. And, joy of joys, you can spell and know how to use proper grammer as well as tell a good story. Looking forward to more.

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