| Title: Chapter 7
| 23 Sep 2014 12:40 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a mixed emotion chapter very well written
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, hope you'll enjoy the next one too
| Title: Chapter 7
| 22 Sep 2014 11:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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Great chapter - very sad because of Tobias's death, but very warm on the other hand.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, hope you'll enjoy the next one too
| Title: Chapter 7
| 21 Sep 2014 5:17 am
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| Reviewer: snarry fan (Anonymous)
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Its great pls update......
.........u r great add injured harry and overly protective snape as well it would b wonderful
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, hope you'll enjoy the next one too
| Title: Chapter 7
| 20 Sep 2014 11:44 am
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| Reviewer: snarry fan (Anonymous)
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U r doing great keep updating
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, hope you'll enjoy the next one too
Death does bring conflicting emotions so that seemed realistic to me. Even when you know that it is coming, it still hits hard. It was sad that it happened close to Christmas though since that memory will be connected to the holiday. On another note, you should check the first paragraph. It looks like something is missing from the last couple of sentences there.
Author's Response: I corrected the part in the first paragraph, thanks for pointing it out. And thank you for the lovely review
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