I wish Dumbledore hadn’t interfered in such a personal moment. Ack, that man.
Well thanks for the angst warning. I had time to read ti in private so my folks won't think that I am high while reading this, angst makes me jittery.
| Title: Chapter Eight
| 01 Feb 2015 3:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What a cliffie! Thank you please update soon!
| Title: Chapter Eight
| 01 Jan 2015 12:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Michelle (Anonymous)
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I really like this story! I think you are a great writer! I can't wait until the next chapter!!!!!
I feel for you Harry. My dad would have done the same thing to me if I'd have done what you did to his face. :)
| Title: Chapter Eight
| 31 Dec 2014 3:55 am
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| Reviewer: maria (Anonymous)
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I loved this chapter! It was pretty angsty, but i love angst, especially Harry and Severus angst. Your characters are very authentic, there's a great tension between them, their relationship is very difficult just like it has to be - now even more in this for both of them very challenging situation. Even more difficult is now your task to solve the problem and establish a father son relationship. I'm very curious how you will do it, and i hope you keep some of that amazing tension between them (because thats what we all love about them! Go for unfair, angry and harsh Severus and insolent, hurt and bratty Harry! Thats how we know and love them ;)) and not turn this into some fluffy stuff. Keep writing, i love your stories!
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