| Title: Chapter Eleven
| 11 May 2015 10:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Guest (Anonymous)
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This was an excellent chapter! Umbridge is pure evil, man. Sometimes, I think she give Voldemort a run for his galleons. I think you did an awesome job and I hope the wait until the next chapter is much quicker! One writing advice I'd offer is parts of the chapter felt a little rushed, so to fix that maybe adding more thoughts in between dialogue might help with that. ^^ Overall, I think you're doing great! Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: That's always been my weakness, I have too many ideas and so I rush stuff to add them all in. Which parts were rushed? I'll do my best to improve my writing the next chapter :) Besides that, thanks so much for reading. I have no idea where the sudden burst of inspiration came from :)