| Title: Chapter Nine
| 20 Feb 2015 8:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Sprite (Anonymous)
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This is amazing! I can't wait for an update!
| Title: Chapter Nine
| 11 Feb 2015 8:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you lovely to back with the site and your story
The ending to the chapter sounds ominous... Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Both Harry and Severus neero get their heads out of their ass's. And Dumbledore needs a good kick in the ass too.
Author's Response: I hope they both snap out of it soon.
| Title: Chapter Eight
| 01 Feb 2015 3:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What a cliffie! Thank you please update soon!
| Title: Chapter Seven
| 01 Feb 2015 3:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good angsty chapter thank you
| Title: Chapter Eight
| 01 Jan 2015 12:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Michelle (Anonymous)
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I really like this story! I think you are a great writer! I can't wait until the next chapter!!!!!
I feel for you Harry. My dad would have done the same thing to me if I'd have done what you did to his face. :)
| Title: Chapter Eight
| 31 Dec 2014 3:55 am
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| Reviewer: maria (Anonymous)
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I loved this chapter! It was pretty angsty, but i love angst, especially Harry and Severus angst. Your characters are very authentic, there's a great tension between them, their relationship is very difficult just like it has to be - now even more in this for both of them very challenging situation. Even more difficult is now your task to solve the problem and establish a father son relationship. I'm very curious how you will do it, and i hope you keep some of that amazing tension between them (because thats what we all love about them! Go for unfair, angry and harsh Severus and insolent, hurt and bratty Harry! Thats how we know and love them ;)) and not turn this into some fluffy stuff. Keep writing, i love your stories!
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