This is really intriguing! Poor Harry though :(. But you've made the transition really well, from something he could reasonably have seen to something that (as I assume now) must be in his mind - until the very end, I was almost convinced that Harry's view of things wasn't that far off, especially the whispers seemed really realistic, but in retrospect I realize where his view of things might have exaggerated the things that are actually there. I'm so excited, on to the next chapter, let's find out what's up with him!
Didn't notice the challenge you'd used at first, so you really had me wondering what had happened to Harry, and what Snape was doing. Well, I still am wondering, so I hope you continue this - its really good.
Author's Response: I'm glad you are wondering! I was hoping to make it not quite clear. I am very glad you like it though! And don't worry, chapters two and three (which is the whole story, unless I decide to split it into 4 chapters instead) will definitely be posted. They are written, it's just a matter of deciding whether I have hit certain points correctly, portrayed certain characters well, etc.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 26 Sep 2014 4:28 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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This is amazing! I am eagerly awaiting more!
Author's Response: Great! So glad you like it! Second chapter should be up pretty soon!
please update soon
Author's Response: don't worry, I will! thanks for reviewing!
:). love it!
Author's Response: Yay so glad you like it!!!
That was a creepy first chapter. I wondered if the whispers were real or all in Harry's mind and, from the turn of things at the end of the chapter, it seems Harry is going to need some help. Perhaps that is why Snape and McGonagall were keeping an eye on him. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next. Did Harry injure anyone and what is going on with him?
Author's Response: Yay, just what I was going for! Excellent. You will find out! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Very interesting. I really like this take on the challenge. Great job!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm very glad that you like it! Especially as the creator of the challenge. I've had so many little random ideas for that challenge, I loved it.
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