The Monster of the Dark... It kind of fits. Also it is melodramatic, just like Draco tends to be.
Again very good chapter. It`s good. I am getting into this story now. I love it when it has something to with Draco as well as Snape. Both my favourite Death Eaters even though they don`t want to be. :) I`m going to keep reading as it is better then I first thought. I know I have bad judgement don`t hate. :) I really do like this story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! They're my favorite Death Eaters too.
Oohh ... I love it! You've caught me with Draco's personality.His reasoning and motives are highly realistic.
The idea overall, with the letters is really cool. I don't think I have ever seen it done before, so high fives for you! I love the idea of the monster in the dark as well.
Oh, just a note, latter as you used it would require two t's - the usage in the story is missing one. :) I like to know if I make a typo so I can fix it (and goodness knows I make too many)so I thought I'd mention that.
Also, nice little allusion to Freud's work with Harry calling himself the Id. No doubt you chose it as reference to the letters possibly containing or having been motivated by Harry's hidden desires? Well, on I go!
| Title: The Monster in the Dark
| 26 Sep 2014 1:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the idea of the mail box, not sure Draco would have had time for it in 6th year!
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