OH MY GOD YES... oops I shouldn’t be so happy about that HOLY FUCK IF MINNIE KILLED HIM AINT SHE GONNA GET ARRESTED?!?!
No, you couldn’t do that to her.
| Title: My Enemy's Enemies
| 25 Dec 2014 11:56 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
A very good twist to the plot thank you
Oooh no! Glad moody is dead but surely dear old Minerva won't be found out to have killed him?! O.O
This is a great story! I love that both Draco and Severus are in it. They are two of my favourite characters. Your characterization of Snape is amazing. He is stern yet overly protective. The perfect combination.
The all powerful Albus Dumbledore is the bad guy. Whatever will poor Severus and Minerva do? I'm intrigued and very interested to know where this story is going. The last sentence you chose to end this chapter is perfect. Thanks for a great read!
Ooh, I like that Alastor is dead, and that it was Minerva who did it. Now, I kind of want them all to go on the run and hideaway somewhere, though I am sure that wherever you choose to take this story will be great. I really enjoyed this description: "His eyes held dozens of questions." Keep up the writing.
Ooh, I like that Alastor is dead, and that it was Minerva who did it. Now, I kind of want them all to go on the run and hideaway somewhere, though I am sure that wherever you choose to take this story will be great. I really enjoyed this description: "His eyes held dozens of questions." Keep up the writing.
| Title: My Enemy's Enemies
| 20 Dec 2014 7:27 pm
|
| Reviewer: Lili (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Omg!
McGonagal killed Moody?
Oh no! How is Snape going to protect Harry no.
Oh, please update soon! You left us with another cliffie!
|