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SEVERUS you left without Harry (understandable but at the same time not really) And you went to the worst fucking place possible to twat PRIVET DRIVE?! NUMBER 4?!? Sevs lost it I’m telling ya
SEVERUS you left without Harry (understandable but at the same time not really) And you went to the worst fucking place possible to twat PRIVET DRIVE?! NUMBER 4?!? Sevs lost it I’m telling ya
Author's Response: Well, goodness, I'm sorry if it annoys you. There are nicer ways of making a correction. Incidentally, I'm also an college level English tutor. My grammar and punctuation are quite good, according to the English department at my college. I've never gotten less than an A in an English class. Mistakes are things that happen, even to the best. I've even found typos and grammatical errors in everything from science journals (those people don't know how to use commas) to novels, to textbooks. These errors include typos, missing or added commas, and even missing words. Have a happy new year!
Can Harry not get a break. Snape protects Draco, but leaves Harry to the wolves. Poor Harry. I hope that someone finds out soon what happened to Harry and rescues him. Omg this gets worse and worse. HOpe these 3 catch a break, sooner, rather than later. Damn, this story is great. Can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Well, Snape had to choose between Draco and Harry, and he made his choice. It was impossible to save both. If he had (somehow, don't ask me how) collected Harry from the Great Hall, the Death Eaters would have already gotten Draco - and as was shown, by saving Draco, he had to leave Harry. Glad you like the story!
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