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Title: Abandon All Hope, Ye Who Enter Here 27 Jun 2020 4:00 pm
Reviewer: PhoenixFeathers (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh you fucking idiot
    SEVERUS
    you left without Harry (understandable but at the same time not really)
    And you went to the worst fucking place possible to twat
    PRIVET DRIVE?! NUMBER 4?!? Sevs lost it I’m telling ya
Title: Abandon All Hope, Ye Who Enter Here 27 Jun 2020 4:00 pm
Reviewer: PhoenixFeathers (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh you fucking idiot
    SEVERUS
    you left without Harry (understandable but at the same time not really)
    And you went to the worst fucking place possible to twat
    PRIVET DRIVE?! NUMBER 4?!? Sevs lost it I’m telling ya
Title: Abandon All Hope, Ye Who Enter Here 01 Feb 2015 9:59 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very unexpected! Thank you
Title: Abandon All Hope, Ye Who Enter Here 01 Jan 2015 7:10 am
Reviewer: slytherinhrw (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh. I can't wait to see what happens now. Ending up in pivet drive.
Title: Abandon All Hope, Ye Who Enter Here 01 Jan 2015 7:04 am
Reviewer: Badgerlady (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, please. "Private Drive"? One of the most elementary mistakes in HP fan fiction. Your typos and grammatical and punctuation mistakes are irritating enough, but there's no excuse for getting such an important canon name wrong. The Dursleys' neighborhood is full of streets named for plants; Privet Drive is one of them, since privet is a kind of shrubbery used in ornamental hedges.

    Author's Response: Well, goodness, I'm sorry if it annoys you.  There are nicer ways of making a correction.  Incidentally, I'm also an college level English tutor.  My grammar and punctuation are quite good, according to the English department at my college.  I've never gotten less than an A in an English class.  Mistakes are things that happen, even to the best.  I've even found typos and grammatical errors in everything from science journals (those people don't know how to use commas) to novels, to textbooks.   These errors include typos, missing or added commas, and even missing words.  Have a happy new year!
Title: Abandon All Hope, Ye Who Enter Here 01 Jan 2015 1:15 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Can Harry not get a break. Snape protects Draco, but leaves Harry to the wolves. Poor Harry.

    I hope that someone finds out soon what happened to Harry and rescues him.

    Omg

    this gets worse and worse. HOpe these 3 catch a break, sooner, rather than later.

    Damn, this story is great. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Well, Snape had to choose between Draco and Harry, and he made his choice.  It was impossible to save both.  If he had (somehow, don't ask me how) collected Harry from the Great Hall, the Death Eaters would have already gotten Draco - and as was shown, by saving Draco, he had to leave Harry.  Glad you like the story!
Title: Abandon All Hope, Ye Who Enter Here 01 Jan 2015 12:44 am
Reviewer: Lili (Signed) [Report This]
    Great!

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