I can't wait for more! This is so good. Stayed up till almost 3 in the morning to finish this. Everything is perfect, except for the formatting on chapter 32. The large spaces between the sentences/paragraphs are bothersome, lol. Anyways, I love how Severus is IC - he refuses to see that he cares for Harry. He obviously cares for Draco, but he never says he loves him. I can imagine him admitting to being 'fond of Draco' though. Harry is amazing. Broken but still together. He manages to pull through every situation. Love Minerva. She is absolutely brilliant. I have to say that the slightly sane Voldemort was a surprise. Can see the reason why Voldemort offers to keep Harry alive though ... the horcrux and everything, and yes, I believe it is in Harry's right to not fight for the Light side. The so called training (more like torture session disguised as training) was horrendous. Stupid Dumbledore! He has gone too far in his manipulations. Love bashing fics, but Pen Pals is not necessarily bashing, more like misguided and believing your side is the right side and vice versa. The whole story is amazing. Love the idea of the soundboard. Magic is brilliant. Wish it was real. Sighs. Your fic makes me think of Silver Lining by BloodyRed_Queen (or something like that) on AO3. It is about Harry being an animagus and he stays as one throughout the year in the care of Snape because of extreme abuse from the hands of the Dursleys. He gets to know the Slytherins while going through an emotional roller coaster. Sorry this is so long. Tired, but don't want to go to bed. I don't know why. Rambling. Sorry. Gonna end this now. Just want to say that this is now one of my favorite fics. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Sorry about the formatting! I didn't know anything was weird about it. Thanks for bringing it to our attention! Thanks for such an in depth, satisfying review.
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| 13 Jul 2015 7:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good tension in this chapter thank you for updating
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm glad that you liked it. :)
Oh no.
I hope they can get Harry out of there. Hope their plans doesn't backfire on them.
Glad to see an update. Can't wait for the next one.
| Title: Payment of Debts
| 09 Jul 2015 12:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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How can you leave us withc such a cliffy?
But, I still like the chapter :D
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