Title: The Truth About Being Fine
| 12 Mar 2021 6:44 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great one-shot! It was packed and perfectly paced.
Title: The Truth About Being Fine
| 17 Nov 2020 6:12 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Amazing short story. I loved it. Fantastic descriptions and emotions, concise, and perfect. Well done.
Title: The Truth About Being Fine
| 13 Nov 2020 4:29 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for a wonderful story, so well written
Thanks to an amazing person, I have found this story again! That scene in the middle I’ve never forgotten. It’s amazing
Title: The Truth About Being Fine
| 10 Jan 2017 4:44 am
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Reviewer: Sakemori (Signed)
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Heartbreaking and beautiful. Very well done, my dear.
Title: The Truth About Being Fine
| 23 Sep 2016 6:20 am
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Reviewer: retaco (Signed)
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It's good... i wonder if you would consider writting a sequel with Dumbledore reaction. Reyes
Interesting story. I particularly liked the line about Harry being proud of keeping his secret even when teachers started looking.
Oh my gosh, that was supremely beautiful and I loved every minute of it--the shock of Snape referring to Hallie as "my little Slytherin" in his anger just...gah. Love. I loved this so much. Thank you for posting. (I wish I didn't feel so inarticulate right now because this fic deserves the highest praise. Snape acted just like I wanted him to act and it was beautiful and dark and Harry's POV was different but still felt so familiar. I'm done spouting incoherent nonsense, but I loved this so so much).
-WK
*reposted because it apparently doesn't like special characters in reviews. :3
Liked this, nice to read harry as first person, makes a change. His inner monologue was convincing although Snape's reactions in the scenario seemed somewhat unlikely. Good end line. :)
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