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Reviews For Love is a Dream
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Author's Response: Thank you, hope you'll keep coming back
Author's Response: Thanks!
"Whatever you want.", Severus said, That should be, "Whatever you want," Severus said, Same for all other talking scenes that continue with, Severus said, Severus whispered, Harry said, blah, blah. Watching out for more! Author's Response: Yeah I have that comma issue, I'll change it some day... in the future... hopefully... :P
definitely I've loved the opportunity to read more about Harry's visit on cementery. You wrote it very realistically :) Author's Response: Oh that's really nice to hear, thank you!
Author's Response: Yeah it was a more serious chapter than the one before. Harry just thought about marty/sev in passing, its not going to happen. I thought about it as well and then disregarded it also, partly because of your reasons. Sev is her patient and it would be wrong to put them in a relationship |
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