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Reviews For Love is a Dream
Title: Chapter 2 - Hi Mum, Hi Dad 23 Oct 2014 3:14 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    your welcome!!!! :)

    Author's Response: :)
Title: Chapter 2 - Hi Mum, Hi Dad 16 Oct 2014 6:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely little piece

    Author's Response: Thank you, hope you'll keep coming back
Title: Chapter 2 - Hi Mum, Hi Dad 16 Oct 2014 8:11 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it!!!! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 2 - Hi Mum, Hi Dad 14 Oct 2014 7:47 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this chapter! Might want to fix the comma placement though.

    "Whatever you want.", Severus said,

    That should be, "Whatever you want," Severus said,

    Same for all other talking scenes that continue with, Severus said, Severus whispered, Harry said, blah, blah.

    Watching out for more!

    Author's Response: Yeah I have that comma issue, I'll change it some day... in the future... hopefully... :P
Title: Chapter 2 - Hi Mum, Hi Dad 14 Oct 2014 7:34 pm
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter :)
    definitely I've loved the opportunity to read more about Harry's visit on cementery. You wrote it very realistically :)

    Author's Response: Oh that's really nice to hear, thank you!
Title: Chapter 2 - Hi Mum, Hi Dad 14 Oct 2014 2:43 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a sad chapter. It's always hard to lose someone. I enjoyed Harry's thought about Severus and Marty though it probably wouldn't be possible. I work for a psychotherapist. Dating or even hanging around with a patient or former patient can cause a therapist to loose his/her license.

    Author's Response: Yeah it was a more serious chapter than the one before. Harry just thought about marty/sev in passing, its not going to happen. I thought about it as well and then disregarded it also, partly because of your reasons. Sev is her patient and it would be wrong to put them in a relationship

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