kudos to you. I'm sorry it ended though :(
I wish that it hadn't taken me so long to come across your story because it is excellent! You have written a well crafted tale with a good plotline, excellent characterizations and really smashing interactions between Harry and the other characters (especially Severus). I love Maia Snape and I thought I'd fall out of my chair laughing as the Headmaster's "crush" on Severus' Mum. But the best thing was the last chapter where Harry and Severus offer each other an olive branch and actually talk together. Well done!
| Title: Confrontation and Resolution
| 18 Jun 2008 5:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Great story, and chance of a sequel? I did notice to spots where the whole paragraphs were italiscised. The only two mistakes I saw.
Thank you for the good story!
Not a bad little story! I appreciate it having been completed. It's pretty frustrating to come across so many other promising tales that aren't finished. Since you wrote it before HBP, that might explain why Mrs. Snape is "Maia" rather than "Eileen"; also the reference to his father being a wizard is likewise incorrect. My favorite bit was in the final chapter, where Maia "put a drop or two of veritaserum" in Dumbledore's tea. Now THAT was truly Snape-like behavior!
Enjoyed your story. Keep writing!
Sincerely,
trust severus' spy
I really liked this story. It was entertaining, differnt from other stories, funny, emotional and surprising. Poor Severus! Those two memories were horrible! I wish you'd write a sequel. Good job AccioSeverus. And, by the way, I love you're pen-name ^_^ wish I could summon him.
| Title: Confrontation and Resolution
| 17 Oct 2007 10:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Floozie (Signed)
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very good, gripping and interesting
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