A very eventful start to your story!
Oh gosh, this story seems different! And so... scary really. Very true to life. I hate car accidents.
Good job so far! :D
ew. hedwig didn't die, did she? that's so gross!
Harry Potter in a car accident is certainly not a story idea that I have seen before on this site. I do remember reading this chapter, but I don't think I reviewed. (Yes, bad me). The idea is very original, great imagination you have there. Too bad Petunia died, :( It would of been interesting to see how she acted once after the crash.
Thank you for writing this!
Harry Potter in a car accident is certainly not a story idea that I have seen before on this site. I do remember reading this chapter, but I don't think I reviewed. (Yes, bad me). The idea is very original, great imagination you have there. Too bad Petunia died, :( It would of been interesting to see how she acted once after the crash.
Thank you for writing this!
Ohmigosh! At first, I was skeptical about this story, but then I decided to give it a try. I'm glad I did--this is a good start to a great story! :)
What a clever story! I really like your Maia character, she's quite fun. I'd never really thought much about Severus' mother, always assuming that she had died. It was quite fun to read about this charming but stern socialite. Any chance of a continuation?
Oh my. I think you have something great going here! I loved the dialouge between Vernon and the others before the car wreck, and the way that the paramedic was talking Harry through everything was very nice. Great Job!
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