Of course Severus Snape wouldn’t leave a job unfinished. Loved it.
love the senior common room's detail! happy that severus was able to help harry! love the halloween one-shot!!
Title: Snape's Last Hurrah
| 15 Dec 2016 10:27 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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rosina, Sorry to use the review area for this purpose, but since the email didn't go through... Could you contact me directly? nch DOT turtle at yahoo DOT com -- Please put "from rosina" in the subject line so I don't spam it! I promise not to abuse your email address, but I did have a question I wanted to ask. I'll respond next time I get back to the library. Thanks! ~~ shadow
Nice story, seemed a bit rushed, a nice long conversation with snape while they were waitingfor mmidnight might have been nice
Author's Response: Snape only had a short window of time to contact and teach Harry, so no time to chat until the job was done. Thanks for reading.
Title: Snape's Last Hurrah
| 02 Nov 2014 6:39 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic story thank you
Author's Response: Thank you.
Ooohh - what an intriguing idea. I like this little tale and the situation you utilized for it. Very nice!
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments.
Wow. That was really NEAT! I liked the way you built the mood up to Snape appearing. Lily waiting for him to finish was a nice ending and I liked that James was involved, too. It sounds like they have all come to terms with the past. Lily's parting comment was a good touch. It was a fun Halloween tale.
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Lovely details, from the 7th Years' Common Room and the intriguing concept of McGonagall's taste in Snape's videos (!) to ginger babies and James' Patronus -- this story has wonderful elements of surprise throughout! I do realize you were aiming for fluff, so we don't get to actually see what happened in Harry's dorm room, but oooooh, if you ever decide to develop what happened behind closed door... Wow! This was a great little story! Leaves much to the imagination, but satisfies a lot anyway! Hurrah! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for a great review - it makes the battle with the evil uploading system (which HATES me) worthwhile.
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