I feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
So sweet! Loved this very much :)
Author's Response: thank you
| Title: A Halloween Carol
| 02 Nov 2014 7:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I loved the de-aged Harry and 11 year old Harry thank you so much!
Author's Response: Yeah, I loved writing de-aged harry - but i wanted it to be realistic. I mean if harry shrank it would be realistic that he'd go into poppys or minervas care, not severus. but if it was only for the night i can imagine sev taking him, especially after the reveal he had with lily
This was cute. I liked the visitation by Lily - great idea for such a reveal!
Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted to try ghost lily
Bad Dumble and his machinations; no lemon drops for him this Christmas.
Author's Response: Haha! serves him right for tricking Sev and Harry!
I really enjoyed the waking-up scene after Halloween! Also, Severus being labeled "paternal" -- he really plunged in instead of holding the matter at arm's length, after Lily informed him of how things were. So many stories have him fighting off the idea of being a father; yours shows what can happen (even awkwardly) when he takes the bull by the horn. Lovely ending, especially with the flannel!
Author's Response: aaw, thank you! glad you liked the scene :) Yeah, I wanted to see how Sev would be if he reacted responsibly and was like "that's my kid, don't care about anything else" I personally believe that knowing he had a child with lily would have a tremendous effect on him and the whole idea would have great appeal. I don't think that its being harry potter would deter him to much - more like a little bitter after taste, if you understand what i mean ;) haha!
| Title: A Halloween Carol
| 29 Oct 2014 11:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awwwww, I loved it! Great job! I loved how Snape asked to hold Harry once he saw his son's real appearance. Cute baby Harry! Thanks so much for writing and posting this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
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